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This, I actually made a while ago but didn't think of posting. Due to a request from a deviant I will be trying to post more of my work, like this piece over here, instead of never posting anything new.
(I don't necessarily believe what I wrote, but in certain cases it does indeed apply.. Are we really free to chase our dreams, or are we just being controlled into thinking we are free, when in fact we are just puppets and he is the master manoeuvring all our actions.
(I don't necessarily believe what I wrote, but in certain cases it does indeed apply.. Are we really free to chase our dreams, or are we just being controlled into thinking we are free, when in fact we are just puppets and he is the master manoeuvring all our actions.
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This I had to comment on for it is amazing.
You have asked some truly good questions and I can only answer a few.
Darkness - For some it is hard to see the light, depending on what has happened and transpired in their lives. It may become dim, or lost all together, and finding it again may be the hardest thing to accomplish. Me I don't look for the sun, for I bath in the moonlight and the stars that shine above. I prefer the night, because I feel safest there. Where no one can hurt me, where if need be I can escape into the shadows.
Judge- No one has the right to judge anyone, and I do believe in second chances *depending on the situation though*, but no judging someone is so wrong. I know this first had through experience for I was judged and wrongly so. It was actually proven by my words and those that gathered around me right here on DA.
Life - That is one I am still pondering on, but you do ask a very good question.
Goals - That is a personal choice for each individual. I am not sure how to answer it. But I do hear and understand what you wrote.
Dreams and Hopes - I used to dream a thousand dreams, but my dreams turned into nightmares. So now I take things one day at a time, for my dreams are all to real, based on nightmares that have truly happen to me. So I prefer not to dream, and hope well I am trying to gain that back.
Sorry if this came out long, but your poem really hit home for me.
Wonderful writing though. I can't wait to read more.
You have asked some truly good questions and I can only answer a few.
Darkness - For some it is hard to see the light, depending on what has happened and transpired in their lives. It may become dim, or lost all together, and finding it again may be the hardest thing to accomplish. Me I don't look for the sun, for I bath in the moonlight and the stars that shine above. I prefer the night, because I feel safest there. Where no one can hurt me, where if need be I can escape into the shadows.
Judge- No one has the right to judge anyone, and I do believe in second chances *depending on the situation though*, but no judging someone is so wrong. I know this first had through experience for I was judged and wrongly so. It was actually proven by my words and those that gathered around me right here on DA.
Life - That is one I am still pondering on, but you do ask a very good question.
Goals - That is a personal choice for each individual. I am not sure how to answer it. But I do hear and understand what you wrote.
Dreams and Hopes - I used to dream a thousand dreams, but my dreams turned into nightmares. So now I take things one day at a time, for my dreams are all to real, based on nightmares that have truly happen to me. So I prefer not to dream, and hope well I am trying to gain that back.
Sorry if this came out long, but your poem really hit home for me.
Wonderful writing though. I can't wait to read more.